Original, appealing presentation of the plot. (Every story should be written like this, with a color guide to enhance emotion.) I wonder if you could substitute the words "children" or "brother and sister" for "Hansel and Gretel" once in a while. It might read more as a story, I think... easier to read out loud. What do you think?
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I like the format of your plot page.
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I wonder if you could substitute the words "children" or "brother and sister" for "Hansel and Gretel" once in a while. It might read more as a story, I think... easier to read out loud. What do you think?