By having the yellow battle ship in the middle, the painting becomes static. You do a lot to create a sense of action, but this one ship in the middle pins down the composition in the middle and denies all that action. Can you widen the canvase si;e so there is a lot more space on the right? You may have to move the blue form all the way to the left too. Then you will have more space to make more battle participants. See? Yes? While you are widening the arena of action to the right, you might consider increasing it in depth too. How would you do that. Good Luck.
By having the yellow battle ship in the middle, the painting becomes static. You do a lot to create a sense of action, but this one ship in the middle pins down the composition in the middle and denies all that action. Can you widen the canvase si;e so there is a lot more space on the right? You may have to move the blue form all the way to the left too. Then you will have more space to make more battle participants. See? Yes? While you are widening the arena of action to the right, you might consider increasing it in depth too. How would you do that. Good Luck.
ReplyDeleteLook at your previous post of this. There is much more depth with the lighter triangle on upper right. Can you see how that worked?
ReplyDeleteEnjoy the battle!!!!
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