Only things I wonder about: Do you have Sheehy's latest image with the writing on the table? Wonder about intense brown of bg hill in action figures of H&G. Wonder where that color came from. Does not appear in the color script or reference images so much I don't think. Just wondering. Also, can't tell at this scale: is there an explanation of the red area on arm of Gretel? Fascinating description given by Jake in class – not sure this image is understandable without an explanation. Still concerned about scale of building in distance. Any way to clarify scale, Lisa and other team members? Also, I can't read plot at this scale, but it is an excellent addition. Do you have any descriptions of characters? That they are warriors, for example, as Jake described? You have a very good story – Just hope you represent it as thoroughly here as you did in presentation. Please accept this (or reject it) as constructive criticism for a project with many strengths.
I like the layout of your poster. I agree with Mary about the action image of your characters; seeing it next to other images, it has a saturation and intensity that makes it pop from the poster, and it would be good to know what your reasons are for some of the colors. I wouldn't expect quite that much blue in the sky, for example, given your research and other environments, and I don't understand what the red area means.
A good, sweeping, logical presentation of all your information.
ReplyDeleteOnly things I wonder about: Do you have Sheehy's latest image with the writing on the table? Wonder about intense brown of bg hill in action figures of H&G. Wonder where that color came from. Does not appear in the color script or reference images so much I don't think. Just wondering. Also, can't tell at this scale: is there an explanation of the red area on arm of Gretel? Fascinating description given by Jake in class – not sure this image is understandable without an explanation. Still concerned about scale of building in distance. Any way to clarify scale, Lisa and other team members? Also, I can't read plot at this scale, but it is an excellent addition. Do you have any descriptions of characters? That they are warriors, for example, as Jake described? You have a very good story – Just hope you represent it as thoroughly here as you did in presentation. Please accept this (or reject it) as constructive criticism for a project with many strengths.
ReplyDeleteI like the layout of your poster. I agree with Mary about the action image of your characters; seeing it next to other images, it has a saturation and intensity that makes it pop from the poster, and it would be good to know what your reasons are for some of the colors. I wouldn't expect quite that much blue in the sky, for example, given your research and other environments, and I don't understand what the red area means.
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