The story you told in class, and the descriptions of the characters strengthened your presentation, and would be useful here as well. The character drawings, particularly, would have more power if described, I think. Where is your intensity chart, Alison?! We will talk carefully in class about all of these, and I'll help you figure it out.
Mary, this piece is a work in progress, since everyone had not given me their final product I posted this so we could present the pieces that needed to be critiqued. I have since changed the layout and it includes all of the elements that are not in this one.
Yes, definitely. I am just waiting for a few more finishing touches to be made among out group because we had a group critique yesterday. I will post it as soon as I can.
The story you told in class, and the descriptions of the characters strengthened your presentation, and would be useful here as well. The character drawings, particularly, would have more power if described, I think. Where is your intensity chart, Alison?! We will talk carefully in class about all of these, and I'll help you figure it out.
ReplyDeleteMary, this piece is a work in progress, since everyone had not given me their final product I posted this so we could present the pieces that needed to be critiqued. I have since changed the layout and it includes all of the elements that are not in this one.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Allison. That makes sense. I look forward to seeing the results. You might post it here before you print it?
ReplyDeleteYes, definitely. I am just waiting for a few more finishing touches to be made among out group because we had a group critique yesterday. I will post it as soon as I can.
ReplyDeleteYes, the new one is a big step from this one! Glad you guys got it together!
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