Monday, April 4, 2011

For Critique 2




3 comments:

  1. My heart goes out to little Ganya. Don't think she has a chance with the Vicious Spy :-(

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  2. Y'all should double check the indentions on the narrative... want to look sharp. We can talk in class.
    You could also spread out the graph to match the color script... Might be clearer?
    Then the text could probably be set up with wide enough margins so that every numbered line was all on its own one line. See? Might be clearer???

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  3. I see, you are trying to fit it all in one area. You could solve this by separating it in two, and putting the story on its own page????

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