I wonder about the light source at top center. It does not seem to enhance the drama. The central dialogue is between the innocent explorer and the awakening giant. That has been enhanced by local light at the base. That dialogue could be strengthened? Does the explorer see the giant? Does the giant see the explorer? Just wondering. The stripes zig-zagging around are good for defining the ground plane as seen in this elevated point of view. They look as if they are on the ground plane, and then at the top it looks as if the Might be on the ground plane still, but maybe not, maybe sailing up to an elevated light source? A bit confusing. I would keep the emphasis firmly on the light of the head and the light of the wee explorer, and discard anything that intrudes on that dialogue. Just a thought. Like the blue-green ice, cold, gemlike, perfect against the dark blue of the ground plane. Helps to clarify the geography.... A few questions. No real answers, sorry :-) btw deadline has been changed to 10 am Tuesday am. Good Luck!
I wonder about the light source at top center. It does not seem to enhance the drama. The central dialogue is between the innocent explorer and the awakening giant. That has been enhanced by local light at the base. That dialogue could be strengthened? Does the explorer see the giant? Does the giant see the explorer? Just wondering. The stripes zig-zagging around are good for defining the ground plane as seen in this elevated point of view. They look as if they are on the ground plane, and then at the top it looks as if the Might be on the ground plane still, but maybe not, maybe sailing up to an elevated light source? A bit confusing. I would keep the emphasis firmly on the light of the head and the light of the wee explorer, and discard anything that intrudes on that dialogue. Just a thought. Like the blue-green ice, cold, gemlike, perfect against the dark blue of the ground plane. Helps to clarify the geography.... A few questions. No real answers, sorry :-) btw deadline has been changed to 10 am Tuesday am. Good Luck!
ReplyDeleteVery nice work. Glad you made the deadline!
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